Monday, April 19, 2010

The Struggle

Foggy facts made fiction,
paint pictures of deception.
Stained glass perception.
Steely smiles slide past truth,
funeral orbs that lament youth.
Haunted by an immaculate Ghost,
harrowing host heckled by
flesh force collision.

3 comments:

  1. Those first two lines are really cool! But I like the whole thing. The funeral orbs, the immaculate Ghost and the harrowing host.

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  2. paint pictures of deception.
    Stained glass perception.

    Haunted by an immaculate Ghost,

    wow....2&3rd lines r so dope to me , really not just typing and not celebrating this holiday today either :-)

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  3. Really deep. This whole poem speaks to me of confusion and inner conflict. It's beautiful.

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